The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognized as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?
In recent years, the significance of biodiversity has gained widespread attention since growing numbers of species are being endangered. This essay will provide possible solutions to help combat this issue.
Firstly, governments around the world should put industrial activities in factories under strict surveillance. This is because these industrial processes often involve the use of toxic chemicals that are often disposed of, in many cases, without being adequately purified. As they are dumped into rivers or buried underground, the toxicity damages the a diverse range of unique life forms live in the affected areas. For that reason, strict and standardized regulations for waste purification should be applied in combination with regular inspections of these industrial facilities. I believe this will help to prevent illegal actions that prioritize profits over responsibilities to environmental safety.
Secondly, I suggest that there local authorities should prevent acts of poaching and hunting animals for any commercial or entertainment purposes. For instance, in some regions in Africa, hunters could pay money to be allowed to shoot down lions and elephants, which are both listed in the red list and are dying out in number at alarming rates, so as they could profit from selling the animals’ valuable body parts. To deal with this, provincial governments should sponsor campaigns to raise public awareness to the current endangered species while establishing protected areas where acts of killing off animals are forbidden and will be met with extensive jail time. This strategy, I think, will help to reduce cases of illegal hunting of vulnerable species.
In conclusion, I believe that it requires combined efforts in different areas with the authorities leading the way in order to preserve biodiversity.
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
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Message: "requires combined" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'combining' or 'to be combined'.
Suggestion: combining; to be combined
... conclusion, I believe that it requires combined efforts in different areas with the aut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60573476703 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98796204201 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663082437276 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.706052489 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.333333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113711253491 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391586252096 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601679936456 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688978389365 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547749594935 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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