The important of biodiversity is being widely recognised as increasing bumbers of species come under threat.
What can be done to maintain biodiversity.
It is undeniable that natural resources come under increasing pressure and the list of endangered plants and animals continuous to grow. There many reason for this consequence such as developments in agriculture, mining, logging or transport. Some people think that the loss of biodiversity is a price we must pay for progress. In my opinion, the government should be protect the world’s plants and animals.
On the one hand, government should be encourages greater understanding of plants and animals. Firstly, government could introduce the important of biodiversity to many people through leaflets, newspaper or on the television. Secondly, they also could invest in the research and preservation efforts of universities, zoos and botanical institutes. This may ensure the survival of individual species and reduction some people destroyed habitat’s plants and kills animals to production new medicines and products. However, this strategy alone would do little to protect whole ecosystems that are under threat.
On the other hand, an alternative strategy would be to protect natural habitats by expanding nature reserves. This would have positive results for those areas by preserving delicate ecosystems. Nevertheless, this strategy also has limitations. It does not protect from phenomena such as acid rain and water pollution which lead to affect large areas. However, there are many solution to limit the damage at its source. The government should be required to demonstrate that they have taken all reasonable efforts to minimize the damage. In addition, public contracts for roads and buildings should only be awarded to firms that have a good environment track record.
In conclusion, we need to protect the world’s plants and animals and reduction the loss of biodiversity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...s and animals continuous to grow. There many reason for this consequence such as developmen...
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Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'protected'?
Suggestion: protected
...In my opinion, the government should be protect the world's plants and animals. O...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun solution seems to be countable; consider using: 'many solutions'.
Suggestion: many solutions
... affect large areas. However, there are many solution to limit the damage at its source. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57454545455 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05476189709 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3149008094 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1764705882 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143312600956 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415270990001 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354393527707 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833927304839 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315736786626 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.