The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two drawings describe the changes in the same island before and after the construction of some transport and service buildings for tourism.
Generally, comparing the two maps, there are significant changes after development. These development make the whole island more crowded which modern facilities. Besides, the sea is also utilized for activities.
It can be seen that before development, the horizontal island which is approximately 260 meters has a few trees on both the east and west sides. In addition, we can see a huge space without service buildings in the middle of the island. Furthermore, on the west edge, a small beach is located for tourism.
However, moving to the second map, the west trees are surrounded by some accommodation houses, with a footpath linked to the beach where a swimming zone is closely connected. Next to the western accommodation, a reception building is rounded by a vehicle track road heading to the south pier. At the north of the reception, a restaurant stands near the sea. Finally, the centre of the island is also designed to service buildings for tourists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this development' or 'These developments'?
Suggestion: This development; These developments
... significant changes after development. These development make the whole island more crowded whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, furthermore, however, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07650273224 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91374195896 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617486338798 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6499755798 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4545454545 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163843118649 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550310868175 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596195344795 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110691720932 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583454388518 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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