With the increase in use of the internet, books will soon become unnecessary.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In this virtual world, internet is becoming basis of life to everyone and some argues that book can be replaced by internet. In this essay, I support on the topic, books are necessary.
In the begin, we all know, today is the world of modern technology and also it is becoming necessities. Evert needed things can be find in online. Even schools are giving emphasis on online study. For example, we can get news or any types of books in internet, we do not need to outside store. We can enjoy it by relaxing in room and also it is less time consuming and low price too. Online can provide you books and any types of articles in various language, which is most beneficial to every age group, who cannot understand English.
However, internet is spreading all over the world but printed media has multitude advantages. The reasons why I like books are, they provide all the things in details, that some hours of audio/visual cannot contain everything. Another usefulness of using publication is no harm on eyesight. For intense, range of internet is not available and affordable to every kind of public. And everyone has equal rights on education. In the country like Nepal, where more than 50% of peoples are in poverty, book can be re-using from one to another.
In conclusion, Online are also becoming part of our life nowadays, but, in my view, books provide wide range of knowledge to every types of people and it can be never replace by modern technology.
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Suggestion:
...very types of people and it can be never replace by modern technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70817120623 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54063256893 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583657587549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8301326797 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142407885193 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470413992908 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336337969859 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090186775328 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275147063343 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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