In this modern era ,technology become properly developed so that usage of mobile phone increase but traditional skills like writing letter become disappear completely my opinion ,i Partially agree agree that writing letter skills disappear completely
Commencing with ,reasons of increasing usage of mobile phone and computers ,In thesedays ,technology is well developed therefore communications become easy because In the mobile phone has different types of apps for communication for instance instagram ,whatsapp ,facebook and other types of applications.moreover,another reason is people prefer to use mobile phone for writing and they do not like to any kind of writing by hand for instance In the computer has notepad hence individuals write anything on the notpad easily.
Moving towards , some people prefer to write letters or someother kinds of writing because writing is traditional skill so In the old times all masses do their any kind of documents work by writing and also also send the letter for communication to anybody therefore, writing is very popular skill of ancient time. furthermore, In modern period, writing is not entirely disappear
because people do their most of paper work by writing for instance In India many government offices prefer to do work by writing hence offices give more importance to writing work moreover
,In the some nations school prefer writing work for instance Indian school take students exam and assignment by the student's hand writing.
To wrap up ,writing is most vital part of world so that people give importance to writing skill than phone or computers .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38188976378 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05759083174 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507874015748 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.610491214 49.4020404114 485% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 341.75 106.682146367 320% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.75 7.06120827912 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432607326269 0.244688304435 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.274251005945 0.084324248473 325% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776795120203 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22971491442 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101702308979 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.7 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.93 50.2224549098 -2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.0 11.3001002004 257% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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