The increased world demand for oil and gas has made it necessary for locating these sources in remote and untouched natural areas. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of damaging these natural areas?
In this modern, the demands for oils and gases becoming higher due to the population. To tackle this problem only has one way, to drill out from untouched natural areas. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of the argument and why I think it is beneficial, all the explanations described in the following paragraphs.
There are mainly two benefits of drilling form untouched areas that are more adventurous. Firstly, it fulfilled all demands of oils and gases and it showed a decrease in their prices. If all nations have enough source for their citizen, the cut their taxes and sell at lower prices. Secondly, it creates more job opportunities for the nations. In drilling process requires more peoples so it provides numbers of employment. For example, as per an article, over 60% of people found their employment in the USA after the government started new plans for drilling areas for crude oil in 2018. Therefore, it creates more positive impacts on human beings such as fulfilling their demands and create profitable businesses for nations.
There are plenty of challenges that the will world face, while we drilling natural lands for our demands. The biggest risks of it; is damage many spices and their habits and farmland become infertility after we dug oil from those areas. As a result of this; many animals become homeless and having problems with their daily food sources. For example, after drilled out all-natural gases and oils in The UAE, many animals become homeless and that land becomes poisonous in 2019. Indeed, it creates many problems for the environment but it creates more positive impacts on humans, this is the only way to tackle to supply demands.
To conclude, this essay discussed both the advantages and disadvantages of drilling untouched areas. If it provides more job opportunities, then it creates a problem for the environment. In my words, to fulfil the demands of needs for oils and gases to humans, it will no doubt gives many advantages than disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, as for, for example, i think, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70798663401 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517857142857 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0618657871 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229991217549 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779447092605 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426625494178 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150048302517 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190853756102 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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