An increasing number of children are overweight which could result into many health problems when they grow older in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?
I'm contemporary settings, more to more children suffer from overweight which leads to numerous difficulties when they grown up in the form of their health and health care cost. In the paragraphs below, there are certain reasons and measures of this problem and I also give my own opinion.
To begin with, there are plenty of reasons which causes problem of overweight. The first and foremost reason is trends which are going on, in the sector of food. In contemporary settings, children attract towards junk food and used to eat it such as pizza, burger, pasta and so on which contains variety of spices, oil and another unhealthy ingredients and avoid nutrition rich meals. Due to this fact, their body absorbs more fatty acids and cholesterol contained meal which leads to problem of obesity. Furthermore, the another factor is their busy and hectic schedule of studies. In today's modern era, academics become too advanced and informative by adding number of lessons in their textbooks. Due to this, students do not have enough time to do some physical activities and they prefer to sit for long hours for their studies. As a result, they become trap in the problem of overweight.
Conversely, there are numerous methods to solve this problem. First of all, school should organise fitness camps and other awareness programmes beside from academic studies to aware students about the importance of fitness and health level for better life. By this, children become aware about these overweight problems and prefer to stay healthy by doing lively activities in their leisure time rather than to use electronic gadgets such as mobile phones. In addition, parents also have need to take care of the diet of their children. By doing so, they teach them about the difference between nutritious food and unhealthy street food. Due to this, if children start avoiding street food and prefer to eat healthy meal. Then, as a result, their immune system become more strong and disease resistance which leads to healthy lifestyle.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, although, there are number of reasons which causes the problem of overweight in children, however, there are also many ways to overcome this fact such healthy diet, fitness activities and so on.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Im contemporary settings, more to more chi...
^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
...eads to numerous difficulties when they grown up in the form of their health and heal...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06434316354 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52766535315 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533512064343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9727205075 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.944444444 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325665482694 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101130696388 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685898118351 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217088732032 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314395249347 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Im contemporary settings, more to more chi...
^^
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'grew'?
Suggestion: grew
...eads to numerous difficulties when they grown up in the form of their health and heal...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, look, so, then, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06434316354 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52766535315 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533512064343 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.0 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9727205075 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.944444444 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325665482694 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101130696388 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685898118351 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217088732032 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314395249347 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.