An increasing number of people are changing their careers. What are the reasons? Do you think it is postive or negative?
There is an increasing trend for people to change their jobs. My belief is that new social patterns are the root cause of this, and that it has a positive effect on society.
There are two main ways are responsible for people changing their work in terms of economic growth and globalization. With regard to the former, as the burgeoning economy entails higher life cost, it is increasingly hard for employees to earn enough salary to support their lifestyles. This naturally lead to more workers wishing to seek better-paid jobs. The other related factor is that the increasing mobility of population is gradually altering people's perceptions of settling. Many people, especially the younger generation, are more likely to work in various places instead of a constant spot in order experience different styles of life.
I would argue that this phenomenon can mostly be beneficial to the society at two different levels. At company's level, employers are becoming more active in the job market so that they can hire more talents who can bring in advanced technology to improve their competition. This is particular the case with IT companies who are eager for professional people. Then on personal level, the opening job market gives more opportunities to workers so that finding a satisfying job is easier than before. The only drawback is that sometimes worker have to deal with some unexpected problems by frequent job-hopping, such as being marginalized by their new teams and failing to adapt new environment. That, however, a minor issue if company and people can hold more open attitude.
My conclusion is that people changing their careers is strongly connected to the transforming nature of society and should be encouraged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17667844523 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83116279564 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614840989399 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9941322227 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14113699979 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583321641422 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841204758438 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11328984431 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533480987605 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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