most of schools give their pupils gagets to use in school by removing books and other bookish things like exams and assignments.plus points of using these gagats are students have no need to pick up a full bag ,and also not fear of losing their boo.contrary these tablets and laptops effects the eye sight of people,also harmful radition come out of them which weaken the mind.replacing books by gagets have some advantages and some disadvantage.
Advantages of using gagets instead of books include students have no need to carry a bag full of books and also these tablets and computers students can see videos on lectures and can easily understant the thing.environmental factor which also important that use of these gagets there is no need to cut trees to make a paper.we all know tree cutting effect environmental condition.these kind of education is cost effective and convient for students.
Negative effects which this kind of education bring are mostly health related issuses like increas use of computer eye sight effect, harmful radition which release from them effect the brain.these are charged by elecricity which also effect the enviromnet.these are not biodegaedable so cause land pollution.harmful radition which release from computers cause many type cancer and neuron degeneration.
replacing book and paper material from students life and giving them the gagets is own trend now a days.which have positive also adverse effect on life.positive effects are mostly economically but adverse health effects are also associated with its use.in my ponit of view books and paper material should be in students life alonge with these gagets and these things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.265917603 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99886122579 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546816479401 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 20.2975951904 325% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.9659756227 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 351.5 106.682146367 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.75 20.7667163134 321% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205907658902 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129981502677 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662808129613 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129981502677 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662808129613 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.8 13.0946893788 281% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -3.97 50.2224549098 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 10.1190380762 281% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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