Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?
More and more students have been opting to undertake a studying abroad experience. This can be a positive experience in terms of expanding one's cultural competence and benefitting the destiny country's economy, as well as negative in regard to feelings of homesickness and possible economic losses for institutions that provide education. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons of such experience.
Many people choose to study in another country for the fact that they want to expose themselves to different ways of being and living. In fact, increasing one's knowledge of people whose culture is different to their own is known as one of the best ways of improving one's emotional intelligence. Not only does travelling abroad for study purposes brings individual benefits, it can also be highly economically advantageous to the welcoming nation. A great example to illustrate this is Australia, a well-known destiny country for international students that has a significant income from international education.
On the other hand, there are also disadvantages to being away from one's home country for study reasons. The most obvious reason for students is missing their beloved ones. As a result, many international students suffer of depression and end up returning home before the end of their proposed stay in the foreign countries. Even though the study abroad experience can bring economic benefits to the countries that promote it, it can also cause loss of money to educational providers. If individuals cancel their enrolments, institutions such as colleges may not have enough time to enrol new students and therefore suffer economically. As well as this, a number of people claim reimbursements of their spending with enrolment fees and education providers have to spend large amounts of money with lawyers in order to protect their rights.
To conclude, studying in another country can have both positive and negative outcomes for individuals and nations. In one hand, such experience may increase one's capacity to relate to people from other parts of the world and boost a nation's economy. On the other hand, it can affect one's mental health due to homesickness and bring economic disadvantages to educational institutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35112359551 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98668297912 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525280898876 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6502947472 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19322666852 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667756458554 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037436384035 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122263745999 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448362057168 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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