increasing the petrol prices is the best way to solve the traffic and pollution problems.to what extent do you agree or dissagree and other effective ways might be.
Today, traffic and related pollution is increasing problem across the world.some people believe high-priced automobile fuel is best way to resolve the ever-growing traffic and pollution problem.In this essay we will discuss from both point of views and some other effective way to cope with such issues.
According to many increasing prices of petrol restrict the utilization of fuel by using public transport.and in turn traffic on road will be less, also noise and air pollution would be reduced.for example Chinese mostly used to bicycle and walking in case of high-priced fuel observed.Although,whole world is such used to automobiles that increasing fuel is also effective way to develop alternative for patrol.Because of increasing prices of fuel in world trade in recent years.As a result most of the countries trying to invent new and cheaper ways of fueling.
But, on the other hand enhanced fuel prices has not effected the consumption of oil,gas and petrol.In world trade market business of fuel goes 8.7 billion$ to 16.7 billion$ in just two years despite of the high-priced according to reports.However,effective way of controlling traffic and pollution is discovering alternative to the resources.For instances Tesla automobile company is manufacturing electric power vehicles which are cheaper and cleaner for of transport.Some other measures could be taken at school and college level to encourage students to use bicycle or walk for commute offices or institution.Also,lectures and seminar could be conduct to aware public about healthy life style.However,government could be invest money on ongoing research about alternative fuel,ongoing research about biological oil like plant may be used as automobile fuel,if this would occur energy deficiency of world will be limited.
In short,in this essay we discussed the both the side of argument but i totally disagree that increasing petrol prices reduces its consumption.Only way to limit the traffic and pollution problem is to development of alternative to fuel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in short, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54019292605 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64220267791 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 20.2975951904 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 269.596341778 49.4020404114 546% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 430.75 106.682146367 404% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.75 20.7667163134 374% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265360715688 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190787599105 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364392855285 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190787599105 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364392855285 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.5 13.0946893788 332% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.14 50.2224549098 -30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 11.3001002004 305% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.04 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.72 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 10.1190380762 324% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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