increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and follution froblems
nowadays it is true that, increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems, is this essay, i completely agree with that statement because it gives more advantage rather than alsadrantage for soup cases.
In the one hand, the main benefit of this problem is vehicle users will increasingly decline, so can reduce traffic pollution, it is because people will be more idle in using gasoline, for example in one country as in japanese with rising gasoline prices, japanese people prefer to ride bikes, as result congestion and pollution problems in japanes can quickly be overcome.
One on the other hand, the lack of this case is make a bourdon on society, it is due with the rising price of gasoline, all staples will also go up, taken as an example is in japanese the cost of goods rose 5% than usual after the price of gasoline rose, their fore crime and poverty rates are incensing
conclusion to sum up, that in order to overcome folds, it does not have to increase the price of fuel, because it will create a burden a the community, the government should raise the price of vehicle tax and limit the amount of new vehicle revenue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, for example, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67464114833 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43836126136 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593301435407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.965437117 49.4020404114 257% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.666666667 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.6666666667 20.7667163134 335% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.0 7.06120827912 297% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205014138083 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156075669637 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12410389769 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129624222837 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116739679311 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 50.2224549098 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.99 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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