It is true that both traffic congestion and excessive pollution are a common phenomenon in many countries. Some people think that in order to reduce these major concerns, it is essential to impose higher prices on vehicle fuel. Although huge petrol price can tackle somewhat this issues, I believe that other possible measures also can tackle more effectively.
To begin with, rising the rate of petrol alone only can not reduce huge traffic in the society. Widening the existing road is one of the most important solutions to rid of it. For this initiative, the road traffic authority should implement a proper guide lines and improve the current bend as well as clear the large narrows on the avenues. To cite an example, in my home town in India, where many people are struggling with huge traffic especially during the peak hours, but today, this problem had almost solved with the help of local council building flyover and wide road. Thus, it makes it clear that when the small roads are converted to spacious, many issues can be tackled easily across the globe.
Another justification is that pollution from the vehicles have been escalating for recent years significantly particularly in urban areas. To reduce this, carpooling system would be a another greater method to deal with this issue more practically. In other words, when people engaged to use this possibilities, the level of pollution rate can be dimished soon. Also, it will not only decrease the global pollution but also can save the money, because most of passengers rely on if rather than simply driving their own cars. For example, carpooling system had already started in many parts of the world where the pollution rate has be plunged dramatically, especially some part of European countries.
However, rising price of fuel also can eradicate both these problems in the planet. This is because, if the price of petrol is increasing drastically , many family can not afford it especially people from unwealthly family. Consequently, the number cars and bikes will decline quickly on road and therefore it create a better and clean air in the towns.
In conclusion, though increasing fuel price of petrol will reduce environmental problems, both carpooling and better road facilities are greater way to address this concern. Unless the authority need take useful techniques and orders, this problems will adversely affect the environment within short period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, as well as, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14572864322 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62510003261 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9000986984 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.777777778 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120159199951 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397833227954 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305086467544 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737665261869 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225677694069 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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