There is a decline in the crime rate today as technology helps in preventing and solving the crime.
How far do you agree or disagree?
Owing to the advanced technology the illicit activities have been decreased significantly across the globe these days. It is often argued that the latest technology plays a pivotal role to tackle it, however, I firmly think that the crime rate also hikes slightly with the help of modern technology in many parts of the world.
To begin with, CCTV cameras and security alarms are being used to catch the criminals nowadays. In fact, these gadgets are also able to record video, audio and blow it loudly and therefore, it can easily eradicate many unusual activities right manner from society. For example, according to the latest statistical data of India, after being applied security cameras and alarms in public places the crime rate has been halved by at least forty percent since a decade.
Moreover, the tendency of doing some social evil activity may decrease due to fear or phobia about stringent punishment. Also some high alert of machines like whole body scanning, X-Ray detector, biometric scanning which usually fix in places like airport, ATM centre and bank in order to catch culprits. Consequently, both criminals and frauds may avoid involving pursuits such as, snatching, burglaries, street war, smuggling, kidnapping and so on.
However, technology also has developed some objects like the camera detector, machine guns, lock cutter and so on, which will certainly provide an opportunity to criminals. In fact, most of the thieves are extra brilliant whenever involve in such activities so this will offer an avenue to them.
To conclude, although new technology can preserve the community from various attack, I believe that the offender can also escape from those situations with the help of dictator and other electronic gadgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, at least, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25177304965 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56191378531 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656028368794 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.0871119826 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.636363636 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106520124534 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362398906829 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502584858193 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582298764561 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519741979862 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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