With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How do you think letter-writing is important?
With my opinion about this problem, I think I support for using mobile phones and computers than writing letter. Because in this age, we must do a lot of thing so people are thinking the way to safe the time but effective. And the solution for this problem is using technology instead for traditional way. People who are using mobile phones or computers will safe time than the old way. Plenty of apps have been products to serve who need writing such as: Messengers, Whatapps, Weibo or SMS…. Those apps are very useful and remarkable is it was a part of out life. Contemporary, I think not only does not traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely, it is also improve the writing skill very very much and have a vary about the ways to writing. Example is many companies were using the mobile phones and computers to all employers can easily writing files or documents. But I think letter-writing is very important with everyone who want to respect someone or like to use the old way. Letter-writing is an ancestor so everyone who read it will really happy and respect the writer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of things'.
Suggestion: a lot of things
...letter. Because in this age, we must do a lot of thing so people are thinking the way to safe ...
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Line 1, column 681, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...s will disappear completely, it is also improve the writing skill very very much and ha...
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Line 1, column 707, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: very
...y, it is also improve the writing skill very very much and have a vary about the ways to ...
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Line 1, column 731, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...e writing skill very very much and have a vary about the ways to writing. Example is m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 194.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68041237113 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60667814737 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7544071197 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364967702755 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142131133727 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820683633309 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364967702755 0.151304729494 241% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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