In this globalization era, environment has become a serious issue for an every person but according to some people individuals are unable to preserve it.Hence, few folks think that government and large companies can easily contribute for protecting the environment rather than individuals.Therefore, the collaboration of government as well as large companies is must important to preserve environment.I partially agree with the given statement and this essay will shed light on both the view points in following paragraphs.
To begin with,individuals have good influence to protect the environment with the help of some significant efforts.Firstly, they have to leave their cars at home for commuting one place to another and much priority should be given to ride bicycle as well as buses because the private modes of transport creates the smog in the atmosphere and becomes the major reason of pollution.Secondly, the crucial role can be played by individual concentration to recycle the domestic waste for using irrigation purpose.Finally,planting trees are utmost good to maintain the level of ecosystem.
On the flip side, government and large companies both can largely contribute at high level to protect the environment because the companies have good amount of money and government has rights to implement strict policies for controlling the large scale problems like; transportation system,deforestation and green house gas effects.In fact,agencies can maintain environment friendly behavior due to make some amendments in the manufacturing of disposable plastic bags.
To conclude, everyone is responsible to take care the planet.Therefore,government and large agencies should cooperate together and make full use of their powers to shield the environment as well as the individual efforts are also significant for this preservation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74545454545 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86515520948 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592727272727 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.233886654 49.4020404114 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 395.0 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 7.06120827912 425% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193290309138 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12088194455 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544635159308 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12088194455 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544635159308 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -14.47 50.2224549098 -29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.25 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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