Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only governments and large companies can make a difference To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental protection has become one of the most important issues the public are concerned about. While some people deem that it is the responsibility of the government and big companies to protect the environment because they hold the power and pool the resources necessary while individuals are too feeble to make much effort, I think that every individual can make a difference.

There is an old saying goes as: Constant efforts bring success. This means that individuals did have the capacity to save our motherland if they band together and move towards the same direction. For e...

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e power and pool the resources necessary while individuals are too feeble to make...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'in summary', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251515151515 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0878787878788 0.0946595960268 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0545454545455 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0484848484848 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106060606061 0.122226691241 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0212121212121 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.21183438794 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0181818181818 0.0326793684256 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0030303030303 0.00163938923432 185% => OK
Determiners: 0.10303030303 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0333333333333 0.021408717616 156% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0030303030303 0.011925033212 25% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1900.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 316.048096192 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35451505017 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364548494983 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294314381271 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23745819398 0.203846283523 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.190635451505 0.137316102897 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21183438794 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.037074148 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 64.1241025503 60.7387585426 106% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9333333333 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3334883719 49.517814964 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7743622355 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 49.3647714604 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.69124875643 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262578766157 0.332605444948 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0776869100228 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0706102538035 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.558247931294 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151937663512 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103502142482 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715394167046 0.0742795772207 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326348658977 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0593788095214 0.0638462369009 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177536590633 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422363380082 0.058150111329 73% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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