In the recent decades, environmental problems is the most important concern of human being. Some people state that personal action cannot help ecosystem, the motivation just come from governments and big businesses. I totally disagree with that statement and I will clarify my opinions with the most relevant examples in this essay.
First of all, it is undeniable that authorities and big companies have take the responsibility for environment surrounding. Due to the fact that from the sixteenth century, the industrial revolution leaded to serious environmental pollution. In other words, the governments should release some policies about environment such as encouraging the residents using recyclable stuff as well as the businesses should follow the process of solving the contamination.
However, governments and corporations are not the only one who can to make the difference, everyone in this world has to contribute to combat environment degradation by particular action. All of us need to protect the environment by the way changing the lifestyle. Therefore, People start with small things like reusing some old stuff, classifying the rubbish into suitable trash cans or using products which are friendly with natural. In addition, everyone can prevent the environmental degradation by planting trees. For instance, according bbc news, an Indian man has planted trees every day in sixty years, as a result, the desert was transformed to be a forest. It is believed that each person concurrently preserve environment that can make the most powerful effect.
To sum up, it is not only the governments and big companies can boost the environment but individuals also can enhance it by specific protection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to be a forest. It is believed that each person concurrently preserve environment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46441947566 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11615438595 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632958801498 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9078820943 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1538461538 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218244264806 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731526506665 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083198279689 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142476205043 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103963842705 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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