Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only Government and large companies can make difference
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Authorities are the only people who responsible for the development of the environment without any help from public , Iam strongly against this opinion and i will explore my point of view associated with some examples and details
Any successful system depends on how people abide by the rules which made by the people whose in charge,for example if the responsible people cleaned all cities from rubbish in streets it would be difficult if public people didn't put the garbage in its specialized places. If all individuals didn't comply with rules it would cost the country a lot and there would be a serious effect on other parts which very important also.
The Government in addition to businessmen have to put a good map which we can benefit from all kind of people to achieve a large environment,for instance government should provide a suitable budget for researchers to do their research and achieve development , also we should care too much with schools and teachers and helping them in creating a good climate for students to success and thus helping their society if governments and people didn't help each other it wouldn't be any development
In conclusion the government and public should collaborate if they need a successful environment and bringing up their children in privileged environment .It's my firm believe that one side can't work alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
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Suggestion: ,
...environment without any help from public , Iam strongly against this opinion and i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
..., Iam strongly against this opinion and i will explore my point of view associate...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...which made by the people whose in charge,for example if the responsible people clean...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...he responsible people cleaned all cities from rubbish in streets it would be diff...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: as well
...ect on other parts which very important also. The Government in addition to busin...
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...he Government in addition to businessmen have to put a good map which we can bene...
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...of people to achieve a large environment,for instance government should provide a su...
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...o their research and achieve development , also we should care too much with schoo...
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...nts and people didnt help each other it wouldnt be any development In conclusion the...
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Suggestion: .
...their children in privileged environment .Its my firm believe that one side cant w...
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Suggestion: Its
...eir children in privileged environment .Its my firm believe that one side cant work...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...eir children in privileged environment .Its my firm believe that one side cant work...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ment .Its my firm believe that one side cant work alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81655281932 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.603944508 49.4020404114 461% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 380.0 106.682146367 356% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.0 20.7667163134 361% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.3333333333 7.06120827912 387% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932768382915 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054326711936 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044737139591 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549812801427 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032386767153 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.4 11.3001002004 278% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.31 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 10.7795591182 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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