Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
The debate of citizen’s getting the ownership of guns has been heated hitherto. While there are some benefits of this matter, I still believe that the drawbacks are available.
As for the advantages of carrying guns individually, it is obvious that gun holders can protect themselves from the situations endangering their lives or worrying them, which can be described as a way to pose a warning sign to the potential threat. The second positive effect of individual gun’s ownership by which people could take advantage of is the fact that for no reason do citizens not have right to self-defence by using guns to violent criminals such as murders, who may bring weapons or knives.
In contrast, offenses of the policy of freely carrying guns claim that were the government not to impose this policy, the mortality rates of victims would not skyrocket since all of people were permitted to own guns, not excluded criminals. Besides, not only do innocent citizens have to suffer from the violent as well as unsafe society once the ownership of guns is passed nationwide but also the development of a country, which is no longer stable and thriving when its citizens are likely to prone to solve problems by shooting to the counterpart.
In conclusion, both positive as well as negative effects of whether individuals should carry guns or not being examined. Where a personal viewpoint is concerned, because the benefits of owning guns are outweighed by the drawbacks, it is better for executive bodies to be entitled to carry guns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...nterpart. In conclusion, both positive as well as negative effects of whether individuals...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, may, second, so, still, well, while, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00772200772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7939959095 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.3551211588 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.125 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 7.06120827912 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136004282192 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570725221625 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506478923535 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857942142431 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552536700635 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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