Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and
had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on
society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of modern inventions in today’s world, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of computers, antibiotic and airplanes has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on human life in recent years. It can be asserted that the inception of computers is definitely the greatest invention over the decades. The essay will elaborate how computers afford a myriad of advantages to almost fields and how they contribute to the invention of antibiotic and airplane and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why a computer is definitely the greatest invention until today, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that computers have become part and parcel of any fields in an economy such as industry and finance, which have greatly increased productivity. As an illustration, most people now find computers indispensable, especially in terms of big business and industry, computerized manufacturing and automated assembly lines have tremendously engendered production. In addition, computers also help people communicate more easily regardless of their location. Thus, the computer is undeniably the most salient invention which brings about impressively positive change for human life.
Nevertheless, the advent of antibiotic and aeroplane is also remarkable, which cannot be neglected. For example, antibiotic helps to snatch millions of people from the jaws of death every year, and airplane has made the dream of flying a reality, which can help people travel abroad within few hours and contribute significantly to the development of commodity transportation. However, such inventions could not succeed without the involvement of computers, as most experiments on antibiotic and airplane need to be analyzed and summarized on computers.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that computers have continuously contributed to the development of mankind, thus they are absolutely the most salient invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64308681672 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19111705327 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.839973953 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0210369212143 0.244688304435 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100220067187 0.084324248473 12% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188869870383 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0141563618588 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143144730137 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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