In parallel with industrialisation and modernisation all over the world, technology is convincing its importance and necessity. Some people concern about its domination in amusement, working, studying and changing many elements of our living area that makes humans dependent on technology. In my opinion, I do agree that technology brings us both merits and demerits, however, if we use it precisely and opportunely, the advantages can obviously surpass the disadvantages.
To begin with, there are heaps of reasons why modern technology is important and benefit our lives. Firstly, in working, the machinery producing arrays help to save labour and also to save labouring money. Besides, these arrays can also thrust the productivity and quality of the products, therefore boost the gross avenue. Secondly, in studying, smart devices play a significant role in researching and remote learning which is extremely meaningful in the middle of the current pandemic. Lastly, in amusement, people nowadays only need their smartphones, laptops with a comfortable place to participate in many different entertainment platforms including games, movies...
On the other hand, technology still consists of some inevitable drawbacks. To be more specific, in working, modern technology might substitutes which means remarkable employees can be made redundant, the unemployment rates will surge, the property will rise and turmoils can happen in some regions. What an alarming condition! In addition, turning to learn, if the students or the teachers are more and more contingent on artificial intelligence, they will lose their enthusiasm at doing researches and exploring new things. As a result, the entire world might be inactive and undeveloped disappointingly.
Finally, according to these benefits and drawbacks mentioned below, I do not refute the enormous bad impacts of technology, however, I suppose that the advantages can overcome the disadvantages if we notice wisely and exactly its limitation and use it effectively.
In conclusion, the benefits of artificial intelligence outweigh the drawbacks if humans exploit it rationally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent platforms including games, movies... On the other hand, technology still cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69592476489 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22919619426 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6228121621 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.785714286 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.7142857143 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172636855818 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530571174512 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514430387291 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861200491737 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418729415455 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.08 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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