Emergence of cutting-edge technology have paved the path of remote-working. Although not flawless, this running approach is undoubtedly more advantageous.
On the plus side, those who get the idea of distance-working supported cite a chain of manifold benefits steaming from this burgeoning scenario; which ranges from environmental friendly approaches to time and money saving durinal routines. For instance, in the process of home-working, no need is felt to drive ling distances getting to work offices, which in turn could be potent in bringing about a considerable decrease in daily green gas emmisions. Besides, people could get their time of driving allocated to other personal chores, and even to work productivity and bloom in their job positions. Another advantage that employee could benefit from appears to be a deduction in their daily commuting expenditures, wheter using their private car(fuel usage), or public transportation fees.
On the filp side, however, opponent of this view point out that not to working in a gregarious company of employees who are working on a different loops of a unique chain might get them a bit overwhelmed about their purposes. Respectively, employees working on their own and in their place, their responsibility as a member of a team-working would be evaporated. Besides, companies would loose their sense of cooperation. Respectively, the company would be suffered from challenges like lack of creating and solidifying their company culture. Generally, In this situation within which people are working in their home, the company building would become small and smaller, Finally, more and more peole may become redundant.
To conclude, remote-working as any other burgeoning phenomenon has its own positive and negative sides. Generally, it is an incumbent apun any company manager to get the positive sides empowerd and try their best to tackle with downsides of this phenomenon.
- Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace eg at home when travelling etc Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadiantage 89
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: LING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'long'?
Suggestion: long
... home-working, no need is felt to drive ling distances getting to work offices, whic...
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Line 5, column 148, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'loop'?
Suggestion: loop
...mployees who are working on a different loops of a unique chain might get them a bit ...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...be evaporated. Besides, companies would loose their sense of cooperation. Respectivel...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ides. Generally, it is an incumbent apun any company manager to get the positive ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48829431438 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14090807253 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598662207358 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9603827858 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.230769231 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220424140305 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838838357484 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505084423998 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116517041613 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599593455822 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.