The international community must act immediately to ensure that all countries reduce the consumption for fossil fuels such as gas, oil and coal. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.
Fossil fuels are really crucial element, provided through nature. One of the most controversial issue today relates to that, why controlling usage of non renewable resources is significant? I completely agree with the statement and given reason that why its important to reduce the consumption of fossil fuels with some examples and assertions in the upcoming paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason is that, fossil fuels are highly beneficial for the economy, because they have a great role in advancement of a nation as well. Similarly, using them less is so important because there quantity is low and future generation also need it. However, if people will not control their usage then future generation will have to face consequences such as the facilities which we are getting from vehicles driven by petrol and factories run by coal, while they will not have these if we not save them.
The second prominent reason is that, consumption of fossil fuels is in large amount and production is less. However, process of fossil fuels production takes millions of year to prepare. Moreover, if the resources will be vanished soon than development of a country will stop, because people are reliable on these resources. Meanwhile, there will a great impact on economy level of a country as there will be no employment if their will be no oil because industries are dependent on them. Therefore, using less fossil fuels is highly significant.
In conclusion, I tend to believe that, every nation needs development and for that availability of all the major things is important either that is fossil fuels or something else. Moreover, I think that every individual should take initiative and should use less non renewable resources and avoid being dependent on vehicle and should walk as it also healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10774410774 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7491371151 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538720538721 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6807349221 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.692307692 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14707523457 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588419984846 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528247216844 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912977671991 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415343748284 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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