As the international tourism is becoming cheaper more and more countries are opening their doors to welcome more tourist .what do you think do the advantages to these countries outweighs the disadvantages.
Certainly it is true that the number of countries welcoming tourist are increasing continuosly as the prices for international travel are falling.According to me the merits to these countries outweigh the demerits. The most significant advantage of tourist visiting these countries is that they stimulate the economy of that nation.As the tourista visit some other country it is obvious tha they will visit some historical buildings and other tourist attractions.Moreover,they will help in running of the hotels and restaurants as they have to eat and accomodate.Tourist to these countries not only hepl in betterment of big business but also the small one as when they visit the local market they will definately buy something which in turn will help in efficient running of local markets. Countinuing in the same tone,tourist visiting these countries also act as a solution to some problems prevailing in that nation.As the economy becomes better,government can easily help in the upliftment of the poor people.Moreover it can help in the development of that nation.It will help the locals to reason out the odd activities prevailing in there cultures but has no meaning for the tourists.However this activity hane some disadvantage like of a tourist visiting the country may meet some unwanted incident and mislead by the locals,which happens very rarely. To encapsulate,it can be concluded that although there are some disadvantage but they are outraced buy the advantages own buy the the increase in the number of tourist visiting a country
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31020408163 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49017541796 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.78549459 49.4020404114 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.25 106.682146367 305% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.25 20.7667163134 295% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.25 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155558263381 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116146258064 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507810836467 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155558263381 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.0946893788 261% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 50.2224549098 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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