International travel is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?
The travelling is one of the most popular hobbies. The international travelling has become much cheaper and many people can afford to visit another country. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks and provide relevant examples.
In my opinion, there are 2 main advantages.The main reason why countries open doors for tourists is the chance to gain cash. Tourism is one the most expensive hobby and when a lot people can afford this, it will help to economic situation in the country by making money for the tourists. For example, Bulgaria is the popular place and respectively, the tourism is the main source of income. Secondly, opening doors can attract a lot of people from all over the world, because now it is less expensive. Therefore, from the point of view of tourist, it is a great opportunity to explore another culture.
However, some people think that the large amount of travellers can debase the enjoy from the vacation. The first argument that they suggest is that, there are lots of tourists in the famous places. However, I believe that if a country allows you to travel with small expenditures, you should not spend your time by looking the monuments or museums, because only tourists visit these places. My parents have been to France and tourists could not prevent them from enjoying the city because they knew how to travel.
To sum up, the fact that you can get excellent emotions from the travelling while you do not spend much money outweighs the wanton argument about the annoying tourists in the famous places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90671641791 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52356624873 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2268222696 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205015824799 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678170189704 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0337073509069 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12024622833 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281039142609 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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