Nowaday's, travelling has become more advanced with the increment of the technology aspects. The question is many countries open their doors to more and more tourists. Yes the advantages of increased tourists are more than disadvantages and i will discusse advantages and disadvantages in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, there are several advantages of increased tourists and the first and foremost benefit is countries economy become developed. To make it more clear, tourist visit in different countries because they like to watch attraction place and tourist also spend money on tickets that can help to develop countries economy. A survey was conducted in USA and individuals obtain that the USA make many attraction place for tourists. Hence, nations are become finacially strong.
Furthermore, second advantage is individuals bonds increased with other peoples. In other words, if in any place have many tourists visites and tourists talk with other people. Meanwhile, they share their culture information so, people gain more knowledge about other cultures. On the other hand, there are few disadvantage of increase in the number of tourists and the major one is increased population. To elobrate, the chances of diseases are become increased because masses meet with other people that can be harmful for country.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantagesof increased masses but advantages are more than disadvantages such as economy is developed and gain more knowledge about other culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, while, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55364806867 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88420958374 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6388335573 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394043113083 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145960699503 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994081486715 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26836096005 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137743228426 0.056905535591 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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