Nowadays's, parks are essential in masses life to keep body fit and fine. The question is it is cruical to construct large public spaces like parks and squares in all town sand citizens. I am fully agree with this statement because parks increase interaction between individuals and health. I would elobrate in subsequent paragraphs.
To embark with, why the parks are benefical for masses and the first and foremost benefit is better communication skills. To make it more clear, when individuals go in the park and they meet with new people so, they could share feelings with others and other masses help to solve the problems because different masses have different ideas. For example, a study revealed that in mexico authority spent a huge amount on public places such as garden.Hence, the relationship become strong between masses.
Furthermore, another benefit is individuals become healthy. In other words, if masses walk in parks and they do some exercise, it can help the individuals to keep body fit. Moreover, they get relief from many many illness such as related to heart problems and overweight. For instance, mostly citizens go in parks in morning and do exercise before going to their work. As a result, with the help of parks citizens can live a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, parks are cruical to make in cities and towns because garden increase interaction between masses and help the people to get relief to the disesaes and to develop the world parks are important.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04032258065 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64726263897 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9137802343 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1538461538 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170054965691 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601233242882 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564415230343 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113773449952 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518528486616 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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