International travelers can cause problems to the countries to which they travel. On the other hand, international travelers can bring real advantages with them. Are the problem international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring?
Do you like abroad tourism? Nowadays, international tourism has always been the hot topic among countries. Whether the problem oversea tourists bring advantages or disadvantages which they visit?
It cannot be denied that the economy of the countries which international travelers come.because they stay hotel, visit beautiful places, insure and medical reason,... however, the rate of unemployed decreased significantly in local nation. Besides, when oversea tourists visits to another countries, people can exchange the cultural between states together.
However, there are some hidden drawback that we cannot ignore. For example, when there are more and more visitors coming, countries will be pollution environments. Besides, because international tourists don’t know law national host nation and they can cause problems related to law of countries which they visit.
In conclusion, oversea tourists bring more benefits, despite their unavoidable bad effects. From my perspective, the government should legislate for sustainable development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...utiful places, insure and medical reason,... however, the rate of unemployed decre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 315.596192385 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.12162162162 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94891989735 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.72972972973 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0910175742 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3636363636 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4545454545 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273264743227 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777353904089 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953624696838 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141903865824 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648307934275 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.9 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.62 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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