Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Internet access helps young people and workers achieve their education and work goals more easily than before.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, the Internet plays a crucial role in residents’ life in various ways. I totally agree that achieving work and educational goals is much more effortless thanks to Internet access.

The way people approach informations is the first reason why I believe that the Internet makes it easier to reach an aim. Nowadays, mostly everyone is able to look for anything they need with just one click, for example, instead of spending hours in the library searching for a piece of information throughout thousands of books, they just need to turn on their technological devices and google the exact thing they want. Furthermore, unlike traditional books and transcripts, online searching tools can even organise the information and display the relevant results, which helps people to gain knowledge more easily.

Besides books and dictionaries, learning from others is also a way to gain experiences. In the past, it is hard to learn from another person because of the distance, but now it becomes more simple wherever they are, it is easier to meet new peers who have the same target. Moreover, famous people in any field appear on numerous social platforms, they can easily be seen on talk shows, interviews and the news; therefore, people are able to learn and hear about their lessons and experiences.

Another justification is that the development of the Internet gives people more opportunities to achieve their goals. Unlike in the past when most everyone only focus on one full-time job in offices and international organisations are rarely to be seen, modern society now witnesses a massive number of oversea companies and employees can even work from home. The profession also becomes diverse, people can get several jobs as freelancers; furthermore, applying and working at a foreign company without moving to a new country is no longer a problem when people are now getting use to working online, especially during the pandemic.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that due to the growth of the Internet, education and work goals are became easier to achieve.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... another person because of the distance, but now it becomes more simple wherever ...
^^
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... Internet, education and work goals are became easier to achieve.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14662756598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81476046587 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3923034776 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221415047811 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918172089791 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952504214395 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135732055918 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684301118096 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... another person because of the distance, but now it becomes more simple wherever ...
^^
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... Internet, education and work goals are became easier to achieve.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14662756598 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81476046587 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58651026393 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.3923034776 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221415047811 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918172089791 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952504214395 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135732055918 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684301118096 0.056905535591 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.