Worldwide web or internet is considered to be the one of the mankind's greatest invention, nowadays almost everything is run through this platform. As it's potential uses increased the threats also raised accordingly. Every system is vulnerable no matter how secure it is, that is the kind of situation everyone is facing right now. Presently countries are struggling to deal with this new problem of "internet crimes", despite of number of measures it is still on the rise.
Hacking is the greatest threat which is faced by the internet world right now. Unauthorized access of any kind of information on the internet is referred to as hacking. Criminals use these informations to their own benefit. For instance, recently some hackers gained access to many of the famous celebrities social media accounts and posted all of their personal photos and details on online. This resulted doubts in the security features of so called social media platforms.
Furthermore, malware attacks are other kind of internet risk which is faced by almost all the mail users. It is a process by which stealing an individuals personal details from his computer using malicious programs. In addition, when e-payments gained its popularity a new kind fraud 'Pharming' came along with it. Which involves stealing of financial information of individuals or companies by creating forged websites.
To tackle these problems companies, individuals and regimes need to straighten their internet security by installing sophisticated firewalls and security softwares in their platforms.In addition, people need to be very careful when they are surfing on the internet or using their personal details over the web. On top of that authorities should introduce strict rules and regulations to control internet crimes and it's consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'mankinds the greatest'.
Suggestion: mankinds the greatest
...rnet is considered to be the one of the mankinds greatest invention, nowadays almost everything i...
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Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...verything is run through this platform. As its potential uses increased the threat...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...me hackers gained access to many of the famous celebrities social media accounts and posted all of...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an individual' or simply 'individuals'?
Suggestion: an individual; individuals
...sers. It is a process by which stealing an individuals personal details from his computer usin...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...d security softwares in their platforms.In addition, people need to be very caref...
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Line 7, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...platforms.In addition, people need to be very careful when they are surfing on th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, furthermore, so, still, for instance, in addition, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41901408451 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96854793291 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3489118125 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213071848626 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657386985639 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626348653462 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128028744786 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598931544782 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.