The improvement of technology has increased since the Industrial Revolution. Nowadays, there are a lot of devices and gadgets in our society, for example, smartphone and tablet computers. To surf the Internet, people need to get these devices. Undeniably, most of the family are dual-income, hence, they could afford to pay for these pricey devices. Not to mention, this improvement has brought many advantages to us, namely, we could contact our friends and relatives from all around the world, however, there are still disadvantages and one of them is causing people isolated from their real lives.
First and foremost, it is noticeable that in this society, the smartphone has been bought by people. Citizens who own smartphone mostly talk to their friends or family by texting, thus, it makes them not knowing how to socialise well in real lives. With this convenience, they, especially youngsters, would rather stay at home than hanging out with their friends and family. As a result, if this behaviour did not change, in the future, they not only would be antisocial but also face problems during their work.
On the other hand, the Internet has not only provided information but also have numerous video games. Gaming count as one of the leisure and recreational activity for children. During the holidays, children who did not hang out or going for vacation will spend their time playing video games. Eventually, they might get addicted and abandon their schoolwork which will cause them to lose the interest of studying.
To sum up, it is noticeable that the Internet has caused many downsides in our lives, however, if people use the internet in a wise approach, it will be the indispensable part of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6766253826 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587412587413 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7472619153 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242762962624 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674939805289 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768278087833 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143887405684 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548929139923 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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