The Internet has caused people to be isolated from their real lives. Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally believed by many people that the Internet is one of the major factors leading to the isolation of people from their society. However, I completely disagree with this idea.
First, in terms of communication, the Internet helps people to keep in touch with their loved ones more easily. For instance, at the moment, numerous social networking sites such as Facebook, Twitter or Yahoo offer much faster and more convenient for users to contact their family members, their friends or their colleagues no matter where they are. They can make video calls or send messages in few seconds thanks to using these websites, but this only occurs when they use the Internet. In general, the Internet can be seen as one of the most powerful facilitators in human communication nowadays.
Second, by using the Internet, people can expand their horizon related to any field they love since most great variety of information is available on it from knowledge about the society to the latest discovery about planets outside the solar system. As a result, it provides them with a closer look at issues they want to explore, in other words, the Internet empowered people to acquire more knowledge about all aspects of life than ever before which help them become more aware of the problems lying in both society and out of society.
In conclusion, due to ease communication and the free acquisition of the knowledge, I strongly believe that Internet users become isolated from their real lives unfounded.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02390438247 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56683181712 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4954437153 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.111111111 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25345405269 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111280680812 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073347642621 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175846193251 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063057407781 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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