Some people believe that a crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss and give your opinion.
People have different views about what is the main contributing factor to crimes in society. While I agree that people’s nature can lead to committing crimes, I would argue that social problems result in crime the most.
On the one hand, I think crimes are caused by those having bad characteristics for a couple of reasons. Firstly, individuals are lazy or not hardworking studying ever since they were young tends to turn in criminals later on. For example, these people often easily are tempted to earning easy money, which makes them become criminals such as burglaries or robberies. Secondly, it is not surprising that students who usually bully others at school are more likely to be future violent offenders than those who do not. For instance, one of my old friends cannot help himself from beating other classmates ever since secondary school if they do not give him their money. As a result, he ends up with being in prison because of his own behaviours.
On the other hand, I do believe that crime is a result of social issues as well as poverty. In many developing and less developed countries, people living below the poverty line are still at the high level. Many of them struggle to meet their ends meet, so they are forced to steal money from others to raise their families. Additionally, individual are likely to break the laws due to a lack of awareness. It is therefore essential to put much emphasis on education in society. If citizens are highly educated, they can have sufficient knowledge and skilled need to get jobs and support themselves.
In conclusion, while I suppose crime might be a consequence of the bad persons, I believe the crime rate is affected the most by the problems of society and poverty.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65889492501 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0087287982 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.4666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7333333333 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281448802239 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869475603063 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108798061523 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184724997784 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641704726294 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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