In this modern era, a number of technological advancements are developed and internet is one of them. Internet plays a pivotal role in everyone's life. It has changed the ways of our lives in all possible ways and leading us to the globalization.I agree with the statement that every person in this world will think and act identically with each other.
To begin with, the number of social media websites and applications are evolved and had a greater number of users all over the world. People are using these applications and getting a chance to meet pupil from the various locations. So, in this way people are learning various cultures and traditions of different people. Consequently, the people are tending to follow those cultures and traditions. However, it leads to the extinction of native culture and traditions. Even in schools they make children to choose foreign language as a first language beacause of that children are unable to speak their native language. Moreover, the way of communication also changed a lot and the people are having conversation in a mobile phones without any physical interactions because of that people might loose the ability of socialisation.
Besides communication and social media, internet provides a lot of employment oppurtunities irrespective of nationalities because of that people are moving to different nations for their work purpose and learning their culture, traditions, and language as well, they are also choosing their partner from different countries so that the offsprings wouldn't be like their ancestors. It will not be too long for people to think and act in a similar way if it continuous.
To sum up, Internet has changed a lot in our lives and it leads to the extinction of our cultures and traditions. We can stop from happening by taking preventive measures, government should encourage cultural programs in order to prevent from extinction of our cultures. people can learn about other cultures and traditions upto for some extent but in the same way they should promote their culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, to begin with, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13988095238 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93549408039 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.742167159 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134775571194 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485610252466 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592036212981 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972178255272 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775485832669 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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