Not too distant past. people would share the information by writing letters or visiting a particular place; however, nowadays, most people have been using the internet to exchange information. Although it is convenient, it has posed some major problems. This essay will discuss the main problems because of the internet and put forward several solutions.
The two primary problems due to the sharing the information online are the chances of data leaking and will affect the person's well-being. Admittedly, there are several disadvantages of the internet and this issue would be the main one. Generally, people do not want to reveal their private information such as important documents, family details and etc; however, some hacker may hack their accounts and steal their personal information, which can lead to some serious causes like cyberbullying and blackmail. Another significant problem is that many do not interact with their friends because of social media, they will send messages on social media such as Instagram, Facebook and Whatsapp, and, as a result, this might affect their social life and they may have trouble while having a real conversation. Thus, these problems will be the major ones because of the sharing of information online.
There are some possible solutions to avoid these issues including a strict data policy to protect data leaking and restrict the usage of social media especially for children to not being affected their social life. If the government take strict action against companies who are providing websites or applications on data manipulation, there would be fewer chances of being hacked. For instance, in South Korea, they have been following a strict data policy to fight against social media because of the misusage of public's data and it has been worked really well. And, parents should restrict the use of social media or the internet for their children, it will definitely be beneficial for them. They can make lots of real friends which will be important for their social lives. In short, these are the solutions to prevent the issue of online data sharing.
In conclusion, the usage of the internet for sharing information can lead to several negative impacts; however, it cannot be denied that it would have advantages too. While there could be chances of loss of people's private data and their behaviour will be affected, restricting the use of social media and making strict policy against data would be workable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
Not too distant past. people would share the information by writing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2080.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18703241895 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60399761942 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483790523691 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.777048119 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.352941176 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5882352941 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119773217227 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501137850516 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467689937627 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927131268119 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462279182252 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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