The enhancement of life accelation is one of the most reason the internet was invented when it appeared our lifestyle was change a lot. Therefore i totally agree with this point of view.
In the past few decades, people lived without internet so when they wanted to meet their relatives or friend it took a lot of time. For instance, my uncle live in Da lat city was far from where i live around 110km. At that time when my mom came to visit him it took over 8 hours went by bus. This was very unconvinence if someone usually with their work they wouldn't see their familymembers in a long time,
Fortunaly, nowaday when the internet is popular. it's helps people easy to communicate with their friend or the lover living in a long distance by popular social media such as Facebook, zalo or instagram so forth. In Addition, they way community approached to knowledges was changed. in the past, if they wanted to learn something new they must come to the class or found and bought the books it's took their a long time. Recently, the internet has developed which is very easy to people by learning or find documentaries, just click on their laptop. By that way they could found everything they need it's really convenience.
To sum up, the invention of internet is very important to our daily life as their helpful which is a great way to us approach and expose to new knowlege more easily.
- The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group
- The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years Without it our lives would be completely different To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group
- some children spend hours every day on their smartphones why is this case do you think this is positive or negative development 84
- some children spend hours every day on their smartphones why is this case do you think this is positive or negative development 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53386454183 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51428199346 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593625498008 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0155351777 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973850227635 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382119876541 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370519777763 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736953844566 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335603553852 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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