It is believed by many that, the internet is the best way of communication, while there are others who are of the view that the communication skills of the society is being damaged due to use of Internet. I find it more logical to endorse the latter view, the reasons for which will be enumerated in this essay after evaluating both the views.
Firstly, one of the main reason why some people have a positive attitude towards Internet is that, it allow people to stay connected with their family loved ones. Today we are living in a society where families are not close to each other, most of them are scattered all the world due to various reasons. So in these cases the Internet can play a key role in maintaining the bond between friends and family, by helping us to communicate with each other. For example, a recent survey found out that majority of people around fhe world are calling their overseas family members through Internet. Moreover, tools like Skype facilitates virtual connectivity among colleagues helping in accomplishing professional tasks.
However, I believe that the internet is destroying our communication skills. This is because when people use the Internet, communication mainly takes part through chatting and e-mails. Verbal communication is comparitevely low during these times. This undermines their interpersonal skills because these people find it more easy to chat with their online friends rather than spending some quality time with their family and friends. For instance, a study conducted in 2015 shows that majority of children are experts chatting, but their linguistic skills are below average and this is because of the overuse of Internet. So it is evident that Internet can destroy our communication skills.
In conclusion, although communication thorough Internet has many benefits, I believe that the use should be limited because the chance of verbal communication is very rare and this inturn affects the interpersonal skill of a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...e attitude towards Internet is that, it allow people to stay connected with their fam...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1672.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83210838885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566563467492 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.507008368 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.428571429 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232572394974 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931141509639 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808934021124 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154092729941 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606250255851 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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