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A criminal rate has been
A criminal rate has been increasing nowadays, which will be the disaster to our world. There has always been considerable discussion about how to tackle the problem of crime. We have many ways to solve this problem from the simplest one to the cruelest one. In my opinion, all the solution are of the same importance to control illegalities.
On the one hand, the longer prison terms for the criminals is important to reduce crime. In the past few years, the number of crime has been exploding because of the short prison term. The offender doesn’t care about being committed to prison. They think being in there for few years is just a short vacation out of a noisy city while living in a luxury hotel, serving 2-3 course meal a day. So the long-term of prison will be the cruelest way to the suspect but will be the best way to stop them from breaking the law. For instance, Filipinos are get used to their law which is giving the longer prison terms for the criminal if they break the law. The rate of criminal in their country has been decreasing rapidly in these years because of the longer prison term.
On the other hand, being arrested and committed in a prison for a long-term also is not a good ideal for the government. In the research of scientist in Mexico, there’s a state that their country doesn’t have enough prison for committing the offender. So there is another way to solve this problem, that is investing money in running propaganda campaigns in which means citizens aware of the importance of rehabilitation opportunities for ex-prisoners after serving jail sentences. Therefore, even the offender has been released, they still have a job and won’t come back to the life of crime. They also are welcomed and encouraged in creating a positive lifestyle by the civilian.
In conclusion, giving the longer prison term still is playing a part in preventing illegal actions. But we still have many improvement ways to solve this problem. To me, reforming the offenders, giving them a job and helping them aware of their revising illegal actions still is the best solution to this complication
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'in fact', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248538011696 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.178362573099 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0672514619883 0.0946595960268 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0409356725146 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0584795321637 0.0437548338989 134% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134502923977 0.122226691241 110% => OK
Participles: 0.046783625731 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03345068942 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409356725146 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00292397660819 0.00163938923432 178% => OK
Determiners: 0.0789473684211 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0116959064327 0.021408717616 55% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233918128655 0.011925033212 196% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1928.0 1933.35771543 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.08201892744 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353312302839 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.268138801262 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208201892744 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.148264984227 0.137316102897 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03345068942 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593059936909 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 66.3162512639 60.7387585426 109% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1333333333 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3556270424 49.517814964 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.533333333 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.9472134595 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.54736842105 1.69124875643 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282057916551 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0892501459781 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.040764604397 0.0668466124924 61% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.531978457661 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10514628587 0.148594505496 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116474116855 0.134430193775 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429619045213 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.338758970581 0.324371583561 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0554744503744 0.0638462369009 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198623699343 0.228012699653 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180475491563 0.058150111329 31% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.