By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy.
At the same time it destroys the local culture.
Tourism is one of the biggest industries worldwide. It has grown, especially over the
last few decades, by leaps and bounds. This is happening because the global citizen now
takes even the slightest of chances to visit uncharted territory. So, all the countries are
eager to invest more and more in tourism. It has its rich rewards, but there are drawbacks
too. At the forefront of all demerits of tourism is the impact on local culture. Still, in my
opinion, such demerits cannot outweigh the benefits of the tourism industry.
In the modern age the culture of one country or society is open for all to observe and
take part in. When in coming tourists get in touch of a local culture they do not
necessarily destroy it. It is understandable that they leave a bit of their own cultural
identity in the place they have visited. But that is not destruction rather a healthy
demonstration of cultural mixing that is happening incessantly all over the world in other
ways too, e.g. international media.
On the other hand, if we miss out on the far reaching benefits of the tourism industry
being foolishly bogged down by the illusionary ghouls of cultural destruction, we are
only loosing. In reality tourism does not taint a local culture, rather it fortifies it. Tourist
visiting places do not only sight-see but want to experience the diverse heritage and
customs also. So, since destroying or transforming the local culture only makes a locality
less attractive to spectators, tourism provides ample motivation to preserve our cultural
identity.
To conclude, we must declare tourism as a boon that encourages the peoples of the world
to be themselves, not like the others, while rewarding those who have valued and
glorified their culture in terms of much needed revenue.
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- By investing in tourism we can earn a lot of revenue and growth in national economy.At the same time it destroys the local culture. 78
- Expenditure of countries 56
- International tourism 89
- Taking a year off 84
- Some people believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n for all to observe and take part in. When in coming tourists get in touch of a lo...
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Line 17, column 9, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ience the diverse heritage and customs also. So, since destroying or transforming t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., if, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74796086015 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9115347932 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165811575912 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555199068241 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628287768848 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044992163649 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505953769283 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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