It is believed that culture and tradition are lost when it is exposed for earning money. However, others believe it important part of promotion. Discuss and give your opinion.
It is thought that the culture and tradition, unique to each place and custom, lost their value when they are exploited for materialistic gains of money. However, some believe that it is an important part of promoting their tradition and unique culture. In my opinion, I believe that it is acceptable to charge money for the tradition and culture in order to promote them.
Firstly, charging for the services of the local deliquisies can provide a steady income for the natives and the local people. Due to having a steady source of income these people can provide better services, which are appreciated by the tourists, to the occasional visitors. To examplify, most of the hill stations in India nowadays have car tours, as opposed to the "on foot " tours in the past.
Secondary, this is to increase a country's economy and help it provide better services to its residents. Since a large part of a country's economy consists of tourism, which mainly consists of culture and tradition, it is beneficial to the country to exploit its customs to earn money.
Finally, paying to experience a tradition invokes and sense of appreciation in the person for the said tradition. While, a lot of people experience the fascinating tradition and unique culture of a place, they rarely ever appreciate it. However, when they pay for the experience, they learn to appetite it and find a delight in it.
To conclude, I believe that it is necessary for people to expose their culture and tradition for earning money. However, it is unlikely for these customs to lose their value in doing so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92222222222 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69700082371 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496296296296 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6529303872 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316905275466 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118258531221 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114186340001 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177784338945 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133073496896 0.056905535591 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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