It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Educational goals are always stay basic causes of living away from ones family in all times.For studying its important to stay away from family rather than living with them.However,i support this view and with arguments will be explains in following paragraphs.
Many people argued that living with family save students from cumbersome problems like maintaining other thing with studies.However,they consider this also put extra burden of their mind, and hence affects their studies.many students for example who have to done their house hold work like cooking and washing cannot find enough time for homework and assignments.In addition according to them parents took strict eye on their children and do not allow having bad company.For instance students who live in college accommodation often addicted to drugs.Many of parents want to spend time with their young once.
On the flip side of coin, from my point of view it is preferable for students to spend time along to learn self disciplined before starting practical life.Particularly,most of the students have careless behavior but after spending one or two years alone give them real change in their personality.Furthermore,maturity and importance of time get as well as an illustration people who execute multiple tasks become multi tasking and can easily hand their stress.As compare to students who never get out from their comfort zone immediately disappoint from harsh situation. Although they can get help from other senior students living with them.for example when i was in hostel many of my senior and class fellow were in same hostel we discuss and take guideline from each other with was really help full.
In this essay we discussed the some advantages of living alone for studying with strong agreement with statement. In short doing some thing by self have more benefits than living in family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27181208054 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19926803765 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630872483221 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.589137481 49.4020404114 420% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 261.833333333 106.682146367 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.6666666667 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295392501471 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1529036723 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380460903411 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187327535076 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186358543616 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.2 13.0946893788 215% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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