It is better for one to keep himself away from diseases than to spend a lot to cure . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is often view that for a person it prefer to prevent health problems rather that to go for medication or treatment , because it is more expensive now a days. It is very much logical for a human being by distant from ailment to survive in a competitive world. However , if someone is sick its mandatory to go for checkup as doctors give better great suggestion to get rid from illness. I completely agree with the given idea that one should keep himself far from ache than to look for restore to health.
On the on hand , someone who involve in health disturbance must go for a doctor , but they have to pay a bunch of amount to become healthy . let's say , a person who is sick and do not know what kind of disease he or she must go for a checkup to diagnose by different type of tests so he or she must have to pay for it . Another consideration is that sometime a person have a big problem in body and take so much long to overcome healthy again . In particular , teenagers are influence now a days in drugs , but when they realize to avoid this thing should have to for treatment and take admission in hospital by pay chunk of money that include room , doctor fee and medicine charges as well. Another point is that health disease need more amount of money to avoid disturbance in body .
On the other hand I would argue that prevention is a great strength to avoid health disease . one thing to distract health problem is to go for walk . such as , after wake up from sleep a person should try to go for a morning walk , because morning walk is best for respiration and health to avoid different kind of diseases . Another positive role is that workout results healthy life by do so . e.g , by lifting light weight in gym is helpful in blood circulation and through such exercise one can never be unhealthy . Another thing is that one can feel fit by playground games to prevent disease like , football or cricket.
In conclusion after discussing the above I come to the point that rehabilitate is imperative for health , but prevention from diseases is superior to live a healthy and happy life .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, another thing, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46335078534 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50517403925 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0078118508 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207189959258 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715281965767 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562324125602 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131408111532 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546873618383 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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