It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
People around the world now have a longer life compare to the past due to the rising on the growth of science and medical. This trend is not restricted especially in developed nations. In my opinion, I think this is expected despite its drawbacks.
The highly percentage of older people brings to the governments issues that need to solve. More old people means more diseases and the government is responsible for them, it leads to the demand on the investment of the medical and health system, such as construction and furnishing of more hospitals. The result is a heavy burden on taxpayer. In addition, as aged people do not work, they slow down the productivities. It creates heavy pressure on the youth generation, they have to work harder, take care of old people. For instant, Japanese’s elderly proportion is high but due to the rising, the time for working is quite long and not much time for leisure activities.
However, longevity symbolizes for the society progress. They reflect the advances on medical and the high technology of the countries. Foreign people normally base on this standard in order to make a judgement and get attention. In the same hand, the aged people gain rich experience which is very valuable to the next generations. The youth might learn a lot of things from the elderly who bring a numberous of knowledge. In particular, they react less failing and we can also see that it is a big advantage.
To sum up, although high elderly proportion leads to some problems, the aged people are a huge advantage for countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, i think, in addition, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80764512184 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9596964922 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153826287458 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046665134768 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440093278596 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928847161543 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202944672666 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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