It is undeniable that, the internet has brought significant changes to our lives especially as tools of communication since the past two to three decades. A group of bourgeois perceives that cyberspace has an outstanding transmission. Although, a group of antagonist admits that internet is not the leading point for exploring the acknowledgement. Therefore, before commenting on my view both the views should be examined.
Examining the former view, there are innumerous reasons to support the magnificent application of the internet. To begin with, the Internet is the cheapest way of communication, which provides the high-speed data transfer. For instance, these days immense inhabitants use WhatsApp and Facebook. Furthermore, the net also provides high-quality video calling, which indulged bourgeois to a great extent. To illustrate this, millions of people using Google Duo for video calling. Besides this, searching online is very convenient and consumes less time than finding a book in a library.
Although, a group of antagonist believes that internet is not the better source for exploring information. The foremost reason is, many websites are not reliable as the enlightenment of topic varies from sites to sites. To represent this, it has been generally observed that online data are not authentic. Furthermore, electronic information misguides an enormous sophomore. This leads to a misconception of students brain drain activity. Moreover, the downside of getting information from the internet is that there are quite a number of fake and fabricated news spreading.
To sum up and give my opinion, it can be said that applications of the internet have many advantages in the modern era. However, each individual should not rely on only the internet for escalating knowledge as the data could not certain. (Words: 283)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nowledge as the data could not certain. Words: 283
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48771929825 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13196764014 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617543859649 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0792036176 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176746854486 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044438197992 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393976274982 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0982816253057 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231470078712 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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