It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes called that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
In this competitive era, to be successful in perticular field is not a piece of cake for every child.it requires special talent and intelligence.Many humans have faith that talent is the thing which develope by born in child.While, others vote that it can be created by special training and hardwork.Both aspects are examined in this essay.
To embark with, people who believes that talent like sports and music is a boon by born argue that, this intelligance are blessings of god to some children. also, sometimes it comes in heredity by their parents. sachin Tendulkar's son as an example, we know that sachin is very successful cricketer. His son Arjun also play very impressive. it is inheritance of intelligance.
Oh other hand, it is undeniable that every child is special if we land a hand with proper guidance they can also reach at peak of any dezired field. Moreover, if parents and teachers create an environment with vision of providing specialized training along with perticular stage to grow more than it will definately get good result. To cite an example, one experiment done in Germany by scientists proved that, children who learn with expert's suggesations and tution were able to improve their performance day to day. Addditionally, it is always proven that practice makes men perfect. this principal can apply to this point.
In a nut shell, some childeren are blessed by god with talent. But, i believe that it is undoubtable fact that factors such as training, guidance and hardwork can make any child talented.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes called that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 67
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes called that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88845991552 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4177481718 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0769230769 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247622545437 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667294721615 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702831704092 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141642374954 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259846318006 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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