It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instace for sport or misic, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taight to become a good sport person or musician.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In our modern society, many people convinced that many people are born with natural talents such as for athletes, arts or music and others are not while some people argued that any child can be trained to turn into an athletic or musician, song writer. this essay will discuss both these views but in my front of view, every single baby are born in this world has their own chance to be a wonderful person in every major if they are well educated.
On the one hand, each child are born with certain talents and it is cause of the success in the future. many studies shown that natural skills play an important role in the development of children in some major. there is no doubt that a baby with some certain ability in physical health or musicality may easier to improve their skills whilst the others one may get struggle in the same situation. In addition, some major requires special skills to become a master such as drawing arts, fashion designing, song writing to name but a few. consequences, people who are born without certain talent may face to many challenges in this major, as a result they may not success as well as the talent one.
On the other hand, there are many evidence in real-life about people who become a master in a major by training hardly than talents. In my own opinion, I strongly argument that, talent may has a heavy impact to a person but practicing decides how successful he or she is. it can be clearly seen that, a baby may born with a talents in a major however, if they were not educated well to develop their talent, they would be the same with a general child, as a consequently, they would not realize their special ability or how fantastic they are. Furthermore, every major requires experience to become a skillful person especially in some special major name above or in academic environment. Thus, talent is never enough to turn a person without educating in to a master. By contrast, a person without certain talents but hardly practicing or researching absolutely reach some great result in every major. however, there are some problems for instance they have to be more patience, train regularly and spend more time than a talent one.
In conclusion, people are born with natural talents become success in some major by training easier than a person without it, but the training process is more important. Additionally, anyone who are well taught still have chance to be a master in every major as any person who has natural talent. For me, I strongly believe that, practice make perfect in any case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, in any case, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2107.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67184035477 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43825627897 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445676274945 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2781355847 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.941176471 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5294117647 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29099001961 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100157208517 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053341158137 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207501397566 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551151210825 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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