Nowadays, society is calling for absolute restriction of adrenalin sport activities. I'm totally disagree with public opinion. This essay will state my opinion and support it with relevant examples.
Human being is from Ancient age seeking for experiences which cause rapid secretion of Adrenalin to the body. Adrenalin as a life saving medication teas human heart to beat faster and boosting production of testosterone or progesterone. Higher level of Adrenalin in human body cause happiness. Extreme sports might be dangerous on physical way, however, mental sickness might have even more serious consequences. If ban of adrenalin activities will be applied, I believe that some people might face several psychological problems which might lead to suicide tendencies due to lack of hormones of happiness.
Secondly, activities such as rock-climbing, scuba-diving and other allow us to explore and discover hidden beauty of fauna and flora. People will not be able to witness pure nature any other way than from the top of a mountain or kilometres below the water level. Moreover, most of the activities empowering physical activity. Individuals who perform it are fit and less likely exposed to urban polluted environment as all activities are happening in nature. Nevertheless, it is scientifically proved that exercise, which extreme sports and activities obviously are, reduce level of cholesterol, risk of stroke, heart attack and many others.
To sum up, I believe that people who perform extreme sport and activities are fully aware of possible negative consequences. Notwithstanding, benefits from performed physical activity maintain reduce risk of population disorders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62352941176 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05906484719 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8444739482 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107872763209 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348862397966 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361118151413 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616691850987 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013136056966 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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