It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that having large public facilities like squares and parks is important for all towns and cities. I completely agree with this idea. In the following essay, I will explain the reasons why.
On the one hand, public outdoor fields could both enhance individuals’ physical and mental health. With sufficient spaces for exercising, it could maintain people’s physical health by boosting blood circulation and keeping their body shapes. Furthermore, more public places with a variety of green plants will make modern cities look cozier where provide people to relax and ease their pressure. Such as the park filled with trees, it not only provides a suitable place for people to sustain their health by doing exercise but also offers people a quiet and comfortable place to relieve their stress.
On the other hand, it is true that people could enrich their social life by gathering together in squares and parks and doing different activities. Some people could take advantage of these public areas to hold entertaining activities and make new friends. As a result, it could significantly help people to improve their communication skills through interacting with others. Take one park in my hometown as an example, Daan Park is always full of distinct age groups who plan a lot of chess competitions. People could know some new friends, discussing their chess strategies in the contests.
In conclusion, public outdoor areas are essential in this society because they can provide suitable places for people to do exercise and communicate with others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27165354331 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73682936634 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4803907376 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192514803966 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734216278733 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999136229331 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149603965353 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971280767752 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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