It is important for all towns and city to have large outdoor spaces such as park and square do you agree disagree give example with reason

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...as are becoming more crowded.50% persons believe that it is necessary for Residen...
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Suggestion: Somewhat
...open spaces such as gardens and square. somewhat, half opeople it is advised to used for...
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Suggestion: As
...ople it is advised to used for resident.As my opinion I join the first club of per...
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... On the hand, people spaces bring more benefit for Resident from health aspect....
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Suggestion: urban
...spect. Clearly, Peoples who live in the urban urban area required walking and exercise.In o...
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...rban area required walking and exercise.In one research show that neighbourhood,wh...
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....In one research show that neighbourhood,who dont exercise become overweight and obe...
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Suggestion: don't
...ne research show that neighbourhood,who dont exercise become overweight and obese. I...
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...utdoor game compared to play video game affect more mental health problem. In addition to t...
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...game affect more mental health problem. In addition to that adults are gathered i...
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... In addition to that adults are gathered in public space have benefit to relieve ...
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...space have benefit to relieve stress and enjoy moment also with family member in ...
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...ly, developing City need to for economic value. City area create new fertile lan...
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...mic value. City area create new fertile land mass which develop opportunity for ...
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Suggestion: Such
...Price of around that place is increase. such as Singapore is city where more parks a...
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...e show overall benefit for government to huge treasure develop. In conclusio...
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...lives in city health as well refreshment aspect. Also overall City economic value...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ity health as well refreshment aspect. Also overall City economic value is in upwar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16888888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50352837431 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7635371778 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9166666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226017140089 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791526136127 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485055010566 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136328256455 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03378278943 0.056905535591 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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